I don't mean to sound rude, but the spelling mistakes in the profile are a bit distracting. "Daughter of the Unicron and Goddess Atena" *unicorn *Athena
"I love dresses without strapless" This sentence is quite confusing seeing as you make it sound like she likes dresses that aren't strapless, yet she's wearing a strapless dress. It should read, *I love strapless dresses.
"They show my personality very much" It should read, *They show off my personality very well.
Golden is not technically a color. Gold is the proper name of the actual color
"When somebody want's to torn my horn" *wants I think you mean it to read, *When somebody wants to tear off my horn
"But god thing is I can pick them with it" *good It should say, *But the good thing is I can pick them up with it. I'm not sure whether you intended her to pick people up with her horn or impale them with her horn. I'm thinking you meant the first one.
"Runing through the woods" *Running
"She is my little cutish unicorn" So she is only 'cutish'? As in, she's only sort of cute? I think what you meant is *cutest Even then the sentence would read, "She is my little cutest unicorn." I think instead it should read, *She is the cutest, little unicorn.
"I have very preety voice." *I have a very pretty voice.
"I get toooo much sweaty and my hair get's ruined." *I get waayyy too sweaty and my hair gets ruined.
"Also I hate learning languages."
That sentence, after reviewing your grammar, I find the most accurate about your character despite the terrible grammar and spelling. If english is not your first language, I'm sorry to have offended you.
You are right, English is not my first language. It's Croatian. And even though I learn English for few years already, I had problem's with grammar and spelling. So you didn't offend me, insteed, thank you for telling me fot mistakes. I will correct them right away ^^